1. Since I was a kid , Ive consideeed different job I would you like to do.
2. First, I wanted to be a fireman,whose unfrom looked so coolly.
3. Then,when I was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.
4. when I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.
5. They were two reasons for the decision.
6. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.
7. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
全国英语高考II卷,英语改错题总共7句话,下面我来一一分解说明:英语改错题,只允许修改10处错误点。也就是说在7句话中一定有三句话有两处错误,根据以往的经验,两处错误一定存在与较长的句子中。
用以上的思维导图加以分析:
1. 改错题中必然有一处名词错,而第1句,考查的是名词,根据different表示“不同的”,说明作者从事的工作有多种多样,因此job 改为 jobs。
2. 改错题中必然有一处是形容此错,而第2句,考查形容词,结合前面动词look是系动词表示"看起来",系动词后要求跟形容词作表语,因此将coolly改为 cool.
3. 改错题中的序数词错误是今年高考新增点,而第3句,考察序数词,根据本句的意义,当我五年级的时候,五年级有两种表示方式,in the+序数词加+grade;或使用in Grade 5,因此将five改成fifth。
本句有两次错误,很显然too much不符合,应改为so much /very much,此为第4处错误.属于考查副词错误.
5. 改错题中必然有一处介词错,而这里是需要添加介词,本句的意思是,当我在高中学化学的时候,在高中使用at/ in high school。
本句有两次错误 ,改错题中必然有一处连词错,而第4句中reconsidered和decided这两个动词是递进关系,故要将or改为and . 此为第6处错误.
本句的意思为:我重新考虑我的目标,并决定成为一名医生,
7. 改错题中必然有一处代词错,指代错误,而第5句中,是指有两种原因是作者改变了想法,用there be句型表示“有”。因此将they改成there.
8. 改错题中必然有一处非谓语动词错,主语表演人用ed ,表物用ing。因此要将amazing 改为amazed.
本句有两次错误,改错题中必然有一处形容词比较级错,而这里是需要去掉一个多余的词修饰词,因此去掉more.此为第9处错误。
10. 改错题中必然有一处动词错,考动词错一定会考到时态和语态错误,而此处考的是时态错误,本篇文章通篇用过去时态,而此处用现在时,所以将is改为was.
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