很多初中学生写英语作文的时候不会表达,总出现表达意思错误或者表达得很生硬这些问题,这些或多或少都会影响写作的评分,那么怎么样才可以提高自己的英文作文表达水平呢?
我们如果想提高自己的英文写作水平,就要了解中考作文评分标准。
中考作文评分有以下五档:
A档:思路清晰,内容充实,结构严谨;
B档:审题略偏,但观点较清晰;
C档:审题较偏,常套文章,语法错误也较多;
D档:审题不清,无中心,词不达意,错误很多,字数也不够;
E档:基本上没有表达出任何思想。
具体作文评分有很多细则,一般是内容和语言各8分,结构占4分。
如果字数、拼写和语法有错误,酌情扣分,具体规则请看下图。
当然只了解中考作文评分标准是不够的,我们还要做到审题目、匿要点、列提纲、定基调、写全文和查疏漏这六大要点。
以下面的作文为例:
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Water Shortage"(以“水资源短缺”为题,写不少于60个词的短文)Use the following points as a guide
Water is very important in our life.
What is the cause of the water shortage?
What is the way to solve the problem?
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名,校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
审题目
审题目:认真审题,看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Water Shortage "Use the following points as a guide
匿要点
防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
Water is very important in our life.
What is the cause of the water shortage?
What is the way to solve the problem?
列提纲
根据文章要点及短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。
定基调
定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
写全文
It is widely accepted that water plays an important part in our daily life. We can’t live without water.
However, we face water shortage nowadays. Many reasons caused this problem. Firstly, some people are unaware of the importance of water. Secondly, people don’t take good advantage of the fresh water. Thirdly, there is serious water pollution.
In my opinion, many ways could be used to solve the problem. We can save water by turning off the running tap. Besides, we should reuse the used water by watering flowers or vegetables. What’s more, we must reduce water pollution and clean up the polluted water.
Water is so important that we should cherish water.
查疏漏
主要查主题、查语法、查标点、查拼写和查表达。
所以,初中生如果不会作文表达也不要怕,只要掌握上面六要点,作文都可以拿高分!
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